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Ugh. Why is it worryingly easy to slip into the mindset of both these characters despite them almost being polar opposites? Hopefully I managed to capture the painful sense of unwitting, innocent tragedy surrounding Izza's journey to the new world, and our dear Jezebitch's dark, scheming angsty descent into hate surrounding her failure to attain redemption.
( Triangle, Tomorrow, Light: Aestar and Izza )
Ugh. Why is it worryingly easy to slip into the mindset of both these characters despite them almost being polar opposites? Hopefully I managed to capture the painful sense of unwitting, innocent tragedy surrounding Izza's journey to the new world, and our dear Jezebitch's dark, scheming angsty descent into hate surrounding her failure to attain redemption.
( Triangle, Tomorrow, Light: Aestar and Izza )